Sunday, February 27, 2011

Revision

My strategy for revising my paper is not have my tone sound as bias, instead of having more a pathos tone im going to make my paper have more of an ethos tone to it. Im also going to try to reach out to another audience. With my orginal paper i feel as though it was speaking to an audience of people who are Lady Gaga fans, i want to speak to more of a general audience.

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