Public Audience Revision

My plan for revising my essay, is to set the paper up to be more question based, rather than claim based. Rather than telling people how much Independent music and other genres have gained from the social media explosion, I want people to think about how much their personal taste in music and how much it has changed and grown over the years. I believe it will be much more effective as a way of giving everyone an understanding of how much the music scene has grown.