Revision

My strategy for revising my paper is to take the information I have and only use the important stuff. Not all the info that seems to be said multiply times through out the paper. After that I will look for more opinions to add to the paper so it sounds more convincing to my audience. I still want to remain a little neutral so I don't lose all of my credibility. I plan to try to convince people that most rappers don't live the life they rap about.