Revising Strategy

My strategy to revise my claim-based paper for a public audience is to change the tone of my paper to be more persuasive. My claim-based paper was focused on how Perez Hilton creates controversies on his website to keep himself famous. In order to revise this paper for a public audience, I am going to focus more on how the crude things he says about people on his website could make his younger audience feel as though they are able to say rude things about people on their websites (e.g facebook, twitter) which could potentially be a cause for a current on-going problem of online bullying.