Academic Essay Revising

My strategy for revising my academic essay for a public audience will be re-word my essay so that it is persuasive to its readers. I will put in more persuasive words that allow the reader to see my essay from my point of view, and see what I think. I plan to shift my tone be stating more facts. I will argue that filming your own hunt is that best way to show that a hunt is successful. I will use evidence from professional hunters and use thier opinion and facts.