Writing changes

My writing for this coarse has changed slightly since the beginning of the quarter. My old style of writing was very informative with small integrations of rhetorical thoughts, to try and keep the reader interested. When writing my revision article I noticed that my writing became very rhetorical and that my paper had a smoother flow to it. Based off of the activities we did in class, I will have most trouble with my comma placement vs. semi-colons. I like to put commas in my writing because it keeps me from having to stop and start a new idea, with commas I can keep my ideas flowing until the thought is officially over (thus overusing them like I just did in this post).